My achieved

Purpose: To inform 

Auidience: 4-6

Walt: write ideas with more detail

Context: My achievements

In the past I have achieved in reading and now I am in emarald. I have moved a reading group to the second most highest group in room four. I m proud of myself. My mum was shocked to hear this. The reading group that I kipped was silver. I am happy for myself.

I think I already knew that was gonna going to move a group in reading.I was so shocked when I heard I was in Emerald. My dad was happy to hear I was in emarald.Even my auntie was happy too. I'm in emarald and I want to achieve to get into a higher group.